What Do You Share with Crit Buddies?

(Or, All I Need is a Laptop. And Maybe Some Wine.)


 

My laptop has issues. It's already three and a half years old, and I use it every day. The left mouse key (or, is it a touchpad key?) is in dire need of a new spring, and I've actually switched the left and right button functions since the "click" function is kind of important in my writing efforts. And sometimes? The certain letters act up every once in a while. By acting up, I mean "don't work," not unless you press on it several times, and then you might get a whole row of that letter. At times it's just the letter J, but other times, it's the letter S. The battery doesn't stay charged anymore. 

But I'm not complaining. Because I love my laptop. Lots.

Because my laptop is how I connect with the writerly/critiquerly buddies. There's just something about a group of people who are as dedicated to the art of writing that fulfills me in a way I don't get anywhere else. 

And they get me, my writerly/critiquerly friends. They see my worst writing and my best. So I tend to—you know—share things with them.

Like today when I posted a new chapter on my online critique group board? I also posted an image of the Fountain of Time from Chicago's Washington Park, where this chapter takes place. Oh, and the poem by Henry Austin Dobson that inspired the monument. These two things aren't really well known, but they meant a lot to me when I wrote the scene. And I love how much my crit group appreciates the reference.

This is just one more thing that is so great about online crit buddies.

What have you shared with your writerly pals that you knew they'd get like no one else?

Writing Critiques Comes with Perks

(Or, why critiquing is like cupcakes.)

My blog readers have already suggested so many critique-writing blog topics, but I’d like to start with the benefits I've found in critiquing. And I don’t mean for the writer being critiqued. Oh, no. I mean the benefits for (me) the developing writer providing the critiques, because the perks are real and they’re writerly life-changing. Psh, it's not just the reciprocal reviews I speak of (although, that’s absolutely frosting whipped up so pretty on top of the double-chocolate cupcake of perks). Here are a few other bonuses that have snuck up on me during my writer-critiquer journey.

1.   Recognizing my own weaknesses: I don’t know how many times I started to comment on another writer’s work, and then forehead-palmed with this realization: I had the same writing tic. Repeated words used, er, repeatedly. Telling not showing. Choppiness. Clichés. When you’re too close to your writing, it’s easier to see certain things through someone else’s work--a fundamental truth that goes beyond the writing world. But once the tics click (tongue twister) in your mind, you can go back and strengthen your own projects. And then you’re pastry—I mean, writing—is that much closer to being agent-ready.

2.   Discovering other techniques: Sure, you can discover effective techniques by reading published material. However, when you critique, you’re in a zone. As you find something that unexpectedly works, you are more likely to delve into it to let the writer know why the passage was so successful. And then, bam. You’ve acquired a tool you can use in your own writing.

3.   Exchanging perspectives: Reviewing a writer’s work whose style is different (e.g., genre, voice, pacing) is challenging, but critical in broadening your writing universe. It doesn’t end at the horizon of your computer screen or your WiP. Finding a critique partner whose mind works a bit askance from your own is eye-opening. Just as you bring a different personality in critiquing their work, they will to yours, seeing your project from angles you didn’t know existed. It’s a gorgeous, hand-crafted sprinkly on top of the cupcake kind-of-thing.

4.   Understanding the flip-side: It’s head-bangingly hard to come up with clear and positive ways of providing feedback that makes a valid point while explaining why it didn’t work for you, as a reader/critiquer. The more you critique, the more you understand how painstaking this process is, and in turn, you appreciate the gift that your critique partners give you. How closely they’re paying attention to your style. How many times they've read each revision. How they catch things that improve your work tenfold. How invested they’ve become in your characters. In fact, you may need to name a few characters after them. Just sayin.

5.   Finding amazing partnerships: We all know how difficult the road is to published writing success, and how many times your cupcake is returned to you with a “no thanks, I prefer cookies,” message. From that incredible, dream agent/editor. And the rejection sends you into darkness and misery. Who is it that picks you up from the pit of despair? It is your network of critique partners who know of your incredible efforts and who knew your cupcake while it was just a cup of flour in the bowl. And they’ll remind you how exquisite it is now. Krista wrote about her personal experience with this here.

Let me know some of the other benefits you’ve found while critiquing other writers. More blog topics are always welcome. And then, off with you crazy cupcake-yielding youngsters. Go critique something already.